Friday 28 September 2018

Moment in time writing

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4 comments:

  1. Hi Savannah, my name is Rawinia i'm from Owairaka School and i'm in room 7. I really like your writing on a moment in time. I remember when I did something like this in my classroom but I didn't post it onto my blog. Have you ever thought about maybe adding a little bit more adjectives into your writing to make a little bit more interesting. Maybe you should check out my blog sometime. I'll leave the link down below.
    http://odsrawiniat.blogspot.com/
    Blog ya late Savannah.
    -Rawinia

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  2. Kia Ora, my name is Ebony and i am in room 25. I really like your writing in a moment in time i rember doing some thing like this lass year with Mr p in my old class room. What part was your favorite part.

    You should come and cheek out my blog @odsebiny.blogspot.com
    blog you latter.

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  3. Hi Ebony,I am a student of Rm : 23 and I really like you comment.
    blog you later

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  4. thank you so much

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